2 thoughts on “Two Cinquain Poems

  1. Yes, mine too. More like prostrate on the ground. Still, I thought “bowing” sounded a bit more poetic than “waterlogged”. 😉 I was inspired by the amazing peony display they have at the Chinese Gardens.

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