departures

And this is to the Not Without Poetry prompt. I guess it struck a raw nerve.

departures

she left me on a friday
i didn’t leave her
she left me in the morning
before i was ready
she left me on the first day
of a new month
she left me
i didn’t leave her

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2 thoughts on “departures

  1. Maybe not a jolly poem, if that’s what you expected of yourself, but a beautiful music, created with just those simple, graceful repetitions. A privilege to share it.

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